Monday, June 16, 2014

Jival's Visitor

I don't think stories just appear on paper. I believe they snatch the author awake and drag them by their toes to their computer. Writing this story was a little like that for me... Hopefully the story speaks to you as much as it did me:

Jival's Visitor
A sharp ray of sun cut the room in half diagonally; and behind a visible curtain of dust was a bed just big enough for a child. A woman lay sprawled across this petite bed, her arm hung to the floor and her head turned to the side. Her eyes got lost behind the worry on her face. A warm glow washed over her skin, but the sight of her body lured in your eyes and hit you like a bullet. Her hip bones protruded from her sides, and her ribs pressed against her vibrantly colored shirt with each wheezing breath.

            Her struggling hand shifted from the floor to her stomach. She rested her fingers gently across her side. The skeleton of her body sunk into the bed, and the only rise in shape you could see was the roundness of her belly. Sadaf was nearly nine months pregnant with her second child; her first a boy of seven years now.

            Jival was full of life, his laughter filled the barren room. His almond-shaped brown eyes held back the tears he felt, and his smile brought forth the strength his mother needed. He would walk down to the river each morning at dawn with a pail half as big as him. He would splash in the cool water only when nobody was looking, and then rush to fill up the bucket and bring it to his mother. The dirt road got washed with spilled water as he trudged the long distance. He tried to be as careful as he possibly could, but somehow only came back with a half of what he had gotten at the shallow river.

            She would wash him each morning with this water; singing a soft song that was engrained in his memory. He would watch her lips as they sang the same soothing tune. Only this morning he noticed that they were cracked and dry. The color had disappeared and the outline was no longer defined. They fought to enunciate words that had come natural only just what seemed like the day before. Her voice became hoarse in the last line of the song. Jival’s eyebrows rose with worry.

            He watched Sadaf inch back over and lay on the bed, holding her stomach the entire time. Jival knew this was a sign he should go outside. He pulled on his thread-barren sandals and galloped outside. His mind was puzzled, but he wasn’t sure what to think. He ran to the edge of the road, and stopped instantly on the side of the road. A rugged car was making its way down his road; gliding over everything in its path.  Jival turned and ran as fast as his legs could carry him to where his mother lay.

            His words were flowing so fast Sadaf didn’t know what he was saying. Her hand rested on the boy’s shoulder and her words were calm and reassuring. Although she didn’t understand what he was so worked up about, she tried her best to assure him that nothing bad was happening. The boy’s mind raced to the hoarse tone of her voice that morning, and he peered at her cracked lips. He tried to tell her that someone was coming. He tried to tell her that it wasn’t family. He tried to tell her that is wasn’t someone walking or riding a bike. He tried, but he couldn’t muster up enough patience to get his words across.

            He stomped out of the house with frustration. He began to gather the sticks he had made into his toys, but heard his mother shriek. The lump in his throat got unmanageable and his stomach dropped. The sticks dropped to the ground in slow motion and his feet kicked dirt as he swiftly spun around to go inside. She was holding her stomach; grasping for the half-filled pail of water. Jival didn’t know what to do; he could only think of the car coming up the road.

            He looked at Sadaf boldly once, and then tore through the dirt road to the car. His frail hands were thrashing in the air, trying to gain attention. The car skidded to a stop. He wasn’t sure if this was the right thing to do, or if he should have just asked his mother.

            A man with a freshly shaved face, and a firmly pressed shirt got out of the car. He had boxes of supplies in the back of his Jeep, and wore a metal device around his neck. Jival wasn’t sure if it was a necklace or some sort of torture device. The same look that crossed his face that morning came again. He tried to talk to the man. The man overpowered Jival with a deep, booming voice. He was scared and took steps backwards away from him. In the back of his mind his mother’s scream echoed and he gained ten seconds of pure courage. He grabbed the man’s giant hand and pulled him towards where Sadaf was.

            The man willingly raced with the child back to the hut. By the time they got to Sadaf, she was panting for air, screaming and holding her stomach. Her contractions were powerful and she was grabbing the side of the tiny bed with extreme force. Tears welled up in her eyes when she saw the man. She knew that he was a doctor. She saw the firmly pressed white shirt, and stethoscope around his neck. She reached out for his hand; she tried to scream for his help but nothing came out but hollow air.

            Jival felt his eyelids growing heavy. He felt his neck radiating heat and his mind blacking out. He fought through the dust filled room to get back outside. He sat against the mud-packed walls of the house until everything around him had a daunting shadow. He rested his head against the wall, and a bright star caught his attention. As soon as he saw the star, a piercing, whimpering cry belted out! 

            “MATA!” Jival said.

            Sadaf turned her head as her oldest boy ran to her side. She held out her arms and Jival rushed into them. The man in the Jeep was cradling her new son. He looked at Jival with fear in his eyes. He sensed this and looked back at his mother. Her weak arm motioned for him to see the baby. He walked as slow as he could all the way.

            The bottles of pills beside Sadaf’s bed were empty. The tops of the white lids were covered in dust, and the dates were from almost nine months prior. The jar of what-used-to-be coins next to the bed had only scraps of old metal. The glass reflected only the man’s image, no glint of money. The man picked up the bottles and looked back at her with disbelief. He told her he needed to go back to his Jeep to get supplies, he could help. She grabbed his hand, and it only took one look. She spent many months wondering if she would make it this far. Thanks to his help, she gave life to a new son.

            Her withered body lay enamored by her two sons. Jival was lost in his brother’s precious look, and the man turned his head to wipe the rush of tears flowing down his face.

 Jival was now a big brother; Jival was now an orphan.

Exhaustion had taken its toll; HIV/ AIDS had taken its toll. But that was then, and this is now. And something like that could never happen today.

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